Back to EPR Bullets

AirForceWriter.com Logo

Thanks for your contributions!

HELP! We need more examples. If you got 'em, they can be shared using the form below. Thanks!



OTHER COMMENTS

Consider Promotion, Future Duty, Assignment, and Education Recommendations, and Safety, Security, and Human Relations


Instructions per MPFM 07-44:

HEADING

INSTRUCTIONS

EXAMPLES

OTHER COMMENTS
(AF FORM 910)

Comments are optional; however if used, bullet format is mandatory. Comments are limited to two lines. This section may also be used to spell out uncommon acronyms. NOTE: Stratification is prohibited for AB – TSgt.

  - Ready for Instructor Duty



- Coord'd w/ 8 mbr USAFE team schedule; inspected 10 facilities/265 C3 radios--certified $360K comm assets
- Superb NCO; led 12-mbr shop as NCOIC for 2 mos, resolved 104 outages/160 PMIs--promote ahead of peers!

- Hard-charging Airman! Maximizes peer potential; consistently takes on leadership roles--promote immediately

- Airshow committee leader--coordinated 10 wpn displays/B-52 load exhibition--success for 9K participants

- Sponsored two inbound Amn; guided/acquainted newcomers w/base agencies...process completed 3 vs 5 days
- Readied a/c for Theater Support Pkg; 12/12 jets deployed on time/executed next day PACOM ATO...promote

- Outstanding performer--extremely devoted to the Air Force mission--produced quality results in all endeavors

- Exemplary instructor with firm grasp of leadership skills and professionalism--definitely promote immediately

- Consistently strives to provide superior results--ready for greater responsibilities--promote ahead of peers

- Superior NCO, supervisor, mentor and manager--a leader among peers--promotion to master sergeant a must

- Competent new Staff Sergeant--given the chance to lead outstanding results will happen--promotion deserved

- Consistently strives to provide superior results--challenge with greater responsibilities--ready for promotion

- Ready for increased responsibilities and looking for ways to improve leadership abilities and skills--promote

- Well-rounded junior NCO capable of assuming greater responsibilities as an instructor--promotion well deserved

- First-rate and extremely dedicated NCO--exemplified standards for all peers to follow--promote immediately

- Superior NCO with an array of technical expertise--dedicated to the future of our Air Force--promote now

- Outstanding performer--substantial aircraft experience enhanced entire instructor core--promote immediately

- Dynamic leader/supervisor--his hard work /tireless dedication inspire all team members--promote now

- Forward-looking NCO--leadership, experience, and expertise capable of mastering any obstacle--promote

- A supervisor's dream--approached challenges with confidence/dedication--promote to Technical Sergeant now

- Outstanding performer--substantial aircraft experience enhanced entire instructor core--promote immediately

- Aggressive NCO with technical expertise--approached all challenges with confidence--promote immediately

- Team player with unlimited potential--continue to challenge with broader duties and responsibilities--promote

- Forward looking NCO--leadership, experience, and expertise capable of mastering any obstacle--promote now

- Outstanding achiever capable of increased supervisory responsibility--eager to transition roles--promote now

- Talented leader--epitomizes professionalism--example to NCOs and Airmen alike--promote immediately!

- Dedicated technical school instructor with continuous can-do attitude--promote to Master Sergeant now!

- Clearly demonstrated valuable leadership skills--contributed to squadron success--promote immediately!

- Applied core values in an exemplary way--superbly motivated all section members/Airmen--promote now

- Embodiment of pride--dynamic and decisive leader with unyielding character--promote Dean to TSgt now

- Total Air Force professional--approached all challenges with confidence/dedication--promote immediately

- Applied core values in an exemplary way--superbly motivated all section members/students--promote now

- Superior NCO with an array of technical expertise--dedicated to the future of our Air Force--promote now

- Rock-solid performer--makes difficult jobs look simple--definite senior NCO material--promote before peers

- Personal leadership style motivates peers and students to a higher level of performance--promote Weldon now!

- Forward-looking NCO--leadership, experience, and expertise capable of mastering any obstacle—promote

- Performed duties with vigor--approached all challenges with confidence--promote next available opportunity

- Positive asset to this organization and the Air Force--lives by all three Air Force Core Values--promote now

- Superb technical instructor--possesses highest quality technical and teaching skills--step promote Kevin now

- Relentless drive and self initiative--demonstrated natural leadership ability well above his peers--promote

- Individual performance and potential mark him as a well-rounded technical instructor and NCO--promote

- Consistently accomplished all assigned tasks--efforts consistently resulted in flight's mission success--promote

- Forward-looking NCO--capable of mastering any/all obstacles--promote to technical sergeant immediately

- Exemplifies today's Air Force NCO--diligent, insightful, and dedicated--promote Michael to TSgt immediately

- Exemplary application of core values--superbly motivated section team members and students--promote now

- Team player with unlimited potential--continue to challenge with broader duties and responsibilities--promote

- Outstanding role model for everyone--presents a positive military image 365 day a year--promote to MSgt now

- Exemplary instructor with firm grasp of leadership skills and professionalism--definitely promote immediately

- Outstanding duty performance and mission commitment--exemplified the standard for all peers--promote now

- Exceeded all expectations--superior instructor and NCO--consistently accomplished difficult tasks with ease

- Individual performance and potential mark him as a rounded technical instructor and NCO--promotion ready

- Consistently strives to provide superior results--challenge with greater responsibilities--ready for promo




MilitaryClothing.com



The content on this page is updated daily. Check back tomorrow for more examples.




Air Force Poster Air Force Writing Guide aircraft democracy





We need more examples. Donate Other Comment bullets by pasting into the form below and clicking submit. Thanks!



Contact editor@airforcewriter.com   Use of website constitutes acceptance of terms