These EPR bullets are not necessarily acceptable as written. Many need to be rewritten or lack impact or results. They are listed here merely as a reference to get your imagination working and remind you of your own accomplishments.
7-level
-- Excelled as Mechanical Foreman, post held by seasoned SNCO--took on new duties with uncommon zeal
-- Led section in 100% air conditioning upgrades/installation; reviewed $3.5M in contract projects for Misawa
-- Supervised repair of air conditioning at Air Force Network facility; protected $2.5M in critical equipment
-- Exercise Evaluation Team (EET) volunteer; evalutates Civil Engineer UCC/DCC major accident response
-- Expertly evaluated over 120 job orders; developed short/long range goals, an astounding 80% completion rate
-- Exercised judgement and initiatieve; made sound recommendation on $1.7M air conditioning upgrades
-- Superb manager; programmed/executed recurring work program with impressive 100% completion rate
-- Standards and professional competence generated immediate confidence/improved subordinate morale
-- Assisted Base Infrastructure Program Review and assessment on central heat plant and steam distribution
-- Liased with Japanese Air Force/civilian authorities bus accident response; fostered strong partnership
-- Established contingency plan and trained facility managers for biological/chemical threat to military assets
-- Created database/tracked ventilation equipment in two hundered facilities--improved air quality/production
-- Active in community--Prepared family style barbeque for 35th FW at Hirosaki's Cherry Blossom festival
-- Took command with ease; completed over 450 scheduled work requests; supervised 11 military/12 local national employees
-- Maintained 99% completion rate on Heating Ventilation Air Conditioning Recurring Work Program
-- Led aggressive electrical evaluation of base-wide HVAC systems; programmed conversion to local 200 VAC/50 HERTZ
-- Identified over 300 sensitive pieces of equipment valued at $1.2M ensuring frequency compatability
-- Flexible and versatile leader with unbounded potential, ready to assume SNCO responsibilities!
9-level
-- Excelled as Facilities Superintendent for over 60 days during incumbents absence
-- Managed 133 personnel in 4 demanding shops: Housing Maintenance, Vertical, HVAC & Horizontal
-- Coordinated Wing Commander's change of occupancy; zero discrepancies noted during move-in
-- Recommended use of user-friendly thermostats and filter replacement media--modernized without expense
-- Re-engineered inadequate 2.5-ton air conditioning system at busy 22nd Comm Squadron snack bar
-- Calculated heat load; orchestrated electrical upgrade, duct modification and installation of 15-ton system--praised by Wing Commander
-- Emceed at Chief Enlisted Manager's farewell as acting First Sergeant; ensured proper send-off
-- Organized base-wide golf tourney benefiting Armed Forces Retirement Home; fundraiser netted over $1500
-- Co-organized base Top-3 weekend golf tournament; great morale booster for base
-- Led heavily-tasked CE section in support of Force Protection--supervised erection of 45 bitburg barriers at key points base-wide; enhanced Force Protection
-- Replaced or re-pinned over 40 entry gates--eliminated base perimeter breaches, enhanced force protection
-- Managed flightline Snow and Ice Removal program--kept airfield operational despite 50% reduction in snow removal assets-- zero delays to airfield operations
-- Planned restroom construction at Readiness Flight facility--Conducted cost analysis, recommended in-house project; saved $70K